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Doubts pooling within my soul
Spreading like cancer to my bone

Controlling apathetic prophecies
Cutting consciousness to bleed

Dried out thoughts and empty memories
leads the unwilling to their knees

Erasing functions of malcontent
Sadist reflections sealed in cement

Thoughts and actions cease to be
Living our lives systematically

Recognition of a rising tide
Discontinuity and reason collide

The will and need for change
Breaks the silence and the pain

Fleeting tracts of thought
Breathes new life into what i've sought

Energy fills my soul, and strengthens the bone
Now fully awake, my soul can roam.....
©2004-2009 ~Noetictrinity
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Author's Comments

this poem follows the circular events of my life. the eb and flow of depression to a more enlightened state. these events always seem to be moving in circular motion for me, gaining enlightenment or gaining depression, always moving towards or away, but inevitably always touching base with either one. this poem starts with the onset of depression moving into it and then away from it.

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Well im an AVS artist and i thought why not branch out into poetry and stuff. :reading:
I read your poem and i actually like it!
You see it reminds me of a time in my life when i felt like you...the sinewave(note the avs coming in) of depression and Joy,happiness and energy.

Nice one i ilke it! :clap:
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i thank you indefinetely catsquared! it's nice to be appreciated, and i totally get the sinewave, i refer to it like a roller coaster as well, lol. if you liked that you'll like more that i have, soon.

--
This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality, embrace this moment, remember, we are eternal, all this pain is an illusion. - Maynard

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December 12, 2004
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